19. Thematic MS Titles || Haiku Fragments
Subtle arches throughout full volume— a hidden extended metaphor building up within multiple poems, with modern connections, modern situations, paralleled circumstances. Unspoken metaphor.
Genesis
Enkidu
Labyrinth
Leviathan
Kraken
Behemoth
God of Thieves
•••••
Or Dividing MS into Two Parts, under One Common Title
This Village, Dark
in October
—and so, part one's title and part two's title are displayed as one, yet broken by a manipulating, awkwardly placed caesura.
••••• Alec Monologue
(5) will you take me back
clipped / slit / wound / trimmed / snipped / cut sunflower heads
(5) sunflowers/heads of
(4) cutgreen glass vase
evening / dusk / night / twilight
(8) sunflowers at night in window
(5/6) wounded sunflower heads
•••••
coffee in a paper cup, cooling on the desktop.
a papercup of coffee
—fall of a pen, within
—three quarters & one dime left after lunch
Genesis
Enkidu
Labyrinth
Leviathan
Kraken
Behemoth
God of Thieves
Or Dividing MS into Two Parts, under One Common Title
This Village, Dark
in October
—and so, part one's title and part two's title are displayed as one, yet broken by a manipulating, awkwardly placed caesura.
(5) will you take me back
clipped / slit / wound / trimmed / snipped / cut sunflower heads
(5) sunflowers/heads of
(4) cutgreen glass vase
evening / dusk / night / twilight
(8) sunflowers at night in window
(5/6) wounded sunflower heads
a papercup of coffee
—fall of a pen, within
—three quarters & one dime left after lunch
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