11. Haiku Sentence


7           circling twice around the house
5           a sly/slow winter moon
5           settles down for night

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5           after circling twice
around the house (a) winter / moon
settles for the night

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8           after circling around the / house
4           a winter moon
5           settles for the night

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857. After circling around the house, a winter moon settles for the night.



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