13. Haiku Sentence

7          slow burn of soap in both eyes
5          tonight an early
2          shower
6          after the falling hour


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5          cut watercress fresh slow burn of soap in both eyes
4          fresh sprigs of mint


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5          fresh cut mint; tonight
5          an early shower
7          slow burn of soap in both eyes


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Fresh cut mint. || Tonight, an early shower; slow burn of soap in both eyes.

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859. Fresh cut mint.
               Tonight an early shower; slow burn of soap in both eyes.

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