16. haiku sentence


5           it wasn't the moon
5           reflected in glass
8           as I cored/peeled apples in the sink


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5/4           reflecting against / my paring knife

3/4           cored apples / coring apples

5/3           with my paring knife / cored apples


                    • carve
                    • pare
                    • peel
                    • core

18           It wasn't the moon reflected in my paring knife as I cored apples / peaches / plums

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862. Coring apples, it wasn't the moon reflected in my paring knife.

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