18. haiku sentence


7           a car running in winter
5          whisky breath kiss raw
5          between your cold hands


                    raw whisky breath-kiss          breathkiss

7           a car steaming in winter
5           cars steaming in winter
7           your car running in winter
7           parked car steaming in winter


                    a whisky breath kiss
                    raw whisky, breathkiss

                    raw-whiskey, breathless

5          between your cold hands
5          raw whisky, breathless
7          a car / engine running in winter

8          In winter, between your cold hands,
5          rawwhiskybreathless
5          rawwhiskey, breathless


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          In winter, between your cold hands,
          raw whiskykiss. Breathless. Engine running.

          Winter between your cold hands, raw whisky kiss.
          Breathless. Engine running.

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864. Engine running in winter. Whisky kiss. Breathless between your cold hands.

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