{46. Three Days}



After an odd interval— suddenly words. It was merely a matter of shifting the persona’s environment closer to an extreme situation outside of my comfort level. Or in other words, having the persona show for me his own discomfort— a beauty in awkward scenes, mundane acts of want. The hidden backroads. I was restricting myself to a set ideal of a previous century, which only put up hurdles and roadblocks. A labyrinth of sorts. I had to meander around it till a clear path was established. A bridge established.



Take the anger out of the Steve / Bob individual relationships. Those mindsets. Throw it into a moment of angst, but resolved on an equal basis from both parties.



Oddly enough, prayer works: expression of need. Of spiritual guidance helps— part of being human. (Or the reverse?)

1.        Extend lift scene— walking down hallway; isolate C. reactions, leaning against wall before entering room

2.       Scar across cheek, not on forehead

3.       “Why did you not let me bandage your hands? These scars—”
“A reminder. Leave it at that.”




burning bridges— https://davidglensmith.blogspot.com/


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